Please judge my poem!!!!!?

The difference between this and avant-garde poetry is that good avant-garde poetry uses a juxtaposition of unrelated images and words to create a feeling of discomfort in the reader and to force them to make conclusions about the modern world. Your poem, on the other hand, is a veritable shitsoup of haphazardly thrown together words. Learn more about actual literature and write something good, you two-bit hack.